I have two versions of a ficlet.  I need to know if one works better than the other.

It is for this prompt by redcirce "AnyTen/Rose: Labyrinth crossover! Ten gives Jareth advice on spunky, willful Earth girls and Rose gives (older)Sarah advice on sexy yet arrogant immortal not-human men who pretend to be British. Or vice versa"

I think I've totally failed ( Read more... )